Tuesday 13 August 2019

Life Lessons About Swimming!

This is my Speech for this year that I wrote. I wrote this Speech about what I love in it I gave some life messages about swimming and in life it is easier to go through it with a team.

6 comments:

  1. Hi Noah, My name is Malsha. I like the way that you wrote a speech that encouraged other people to keep on going and never give up. Maybe you could have written a bit more.

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    1. Hi Malsha, Thanks for you great comment on my blog i will take it on board next time.

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  2. Kia Ora Noah, my name is Mary and I am from Saint Patrick's School located in Auckland. What I really like about your post is that you added some helpful text that could help other people in conquering their fears in swimming. Keep up the great work.

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    1. Hi Mary, thank you for that great comment you posted.

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  3. Good luck with your upcoming speech day - just believe! DAD

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    1. Hi DAD, thanks for that great comment on my speech.

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